Essential Guide to Writing a Novel

James Thayer
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Jan 31, 2025 • 28min

Episode 150 - How to deliver a surprise in the story.

Good stories are filled with surprises for the reader.  There are right and wrong ways for us writers to deliver surprises, and I'll talk about them here.  Also, the importance of a tie-up-later list.  Here is a 20-episode master class on fiction writing—a start-to-finish course covering plot, characters, dialogue, scenes, sentence-level craft, and much more.  Each episode is focused and about 30 minutes.  The full class—all 20 episodes—is available now for a one-time price of forty-nine dollars.  If you want structured, concise guidance, click the Buy the Master Class link in the show notes to get started.Support the showBuy the master class.
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Jan 24, 2025 • 26min

Episode 149 - How masterful writers use details.

What do George Orwell, Sara Gruen, Jean Shepherd, and John Steinbeck have in common?  Many things but foremost among them is their expert use of details that take readers away, that lift us readers out of our chairs and transport us to their places and times.  Here are thoughts on their use of details.  Also, we should avoid cliches like the plague. Support the showBuy the master class.
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Jan 17, 2025 • 27min

Episode 148: A magical way to end one scene and begin another.

Here is a magical way to end a scene and to begin another without worrying about travel and time between scenes.  Also: avoiding dangling modifiers.  And how Bernard Malamud worked, and Helen Dunmore's rules of writing.Here is a 20-episode master class on fiction writing—a start-to-finish course covering plot, characters, dialogue, scenes, sentence-level craft, and much more.  Each episode is focused and about 30 minutes.  The full class—all 20 episodes—is available now for a one-time price of forty-nine dollars.  If you want structured, concise guidance, click the Buy the Master Class link in the show notes to get started.Support the showBuy the master class.
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Jan 10, 2025 • 26min

Episode 147 - Make sure it's important and make it short.

What should we do if we must--absolutely must--have an element in our story that might not be fully entertaining and engaging?   1) Make sure it's important and 2) make it short.  Here are thoughts about this critical technique.  Also, details in our descriptions are important, but which should we use and which should we leave out?Support the showBuy the master class.
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Jan 3, 2025 • 27min

Episode 146 - How to make our character unforgettable.

We writers can use lovely phrases and perceptive observations when describing our character in our story, and yet the reader may still quickly forget the character.  Here's how to make a character stick in the reader's mind.  Also, are you a born writer?  Maybe so.  Here's why you might be.Here is a 20-episode master class on fiction writing—a start-to-finish course covering plot, characters, dialogue, scenes, sentence-level craft, and much more.  Each episode is focused and about 30 minutes.  The full class—all 20 episodes—is available now for a one-time price of forty-nine dollars.  If you want structured, concise guidance, click the Buy the Master Class link in the show notes to get started.Support the showBuy the master class.
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Dec 27, 2024 • 27min

Episode 145 - Bringing our settings to life.

We can show (as opposed to tell) as we create a setting for our story.  Showing will make our settings vivid, and will allow the setting description to do double duty: describe the place and suggest a mood.  Also, reasons to avoid meetings in our story.Support the showBuy the master class.
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Dec 20, 2024 • 27min

Episode 144 - One sentence can bring our character to life.

We'll build our character as we write along, adding descriptions and actions and dialogue.  But there is a way with only one or two sentences to reveal something powerful and memorable about the character--in just a few words--and I'll talk about the technique here.  Also, Joyce Carol Oates's rules of writing.  And punctuating dialogue, with important techniques about our character's spoken sentences so that our dialogue is a clear window to the story.Here is a 20-episode master class on fiction writing—a start-to-finish course covering plot, characters, dialogue, scenes, sentence-level craft, and much more.  Each episode is focused and about 30 minutes.  The full class—all 20 episodes—is available now for a one-time price of forty-nine dollars.  If you want structured, concise guidance, click the Buy the Master Class link in the show notes to get started.Support the showBuy the master class.
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Dec 13, 2024 • 27min

Episode 143 - The three most important sentences when writing a scene.

Jack Bickham's three sentences on scene construction are the best I've found regarding how to write a scene.  Here are why these sentences are important for us writers.  Also: Sarah Ann Waters' terrific ten rules of writing.  And avoiding the word "not."Support the showBuy the master class.
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Dec 6, 2024 • 26min

Episode 142 - A big technique for literary writing.

Many listeners are writing literary novels and stories.  Here is an important technique regarding construction of a literary story, and it also applies to commercial novels.  Here is a 20-episode master class on fiction writing—a start-to-finish course covering plot, characters, dialogue, scenes, sentence-level craft, and much more.  Each episode is focused and about 30 minutes.  The full class—all 20 episodes—is available now for a one-time price of forty-nine dollars.  If you want structured, concise guidance, click the Buy the Master Class link in the show notes to get started.Support the showBuy the master class.
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Nov 29, 2024 • 28min

Episode 141 - How to begin and end scenes.

The easiest thing for a reader to do is to quit reading our story.  Here are ways to begin and end scenes that'll prevent that from happening.  Our scenes' beginnings and endings will propel the reader farther into the story.Support the showBuy the master class.

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