Writing Excuses

21.06: Begin and the Beginning

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Feb 8, 2026
They explore what makes a strong beginning and why it pulls readers in. The hosts compare openings to hosting a party and discuss tone, control, and carefully chosen details. They warn against starting too early and explain quick rewards that build trust. They also recommend testing openings with a cold slush pile and revising beginnings after the draft is finished.
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INSIGHT

Beginnings Must Ground Readers Fast

  • Beginnings must quickly ground readers in character, stakes, world, and tone so they can decide to continue.
  • Mary Robinette Kowal emphasizes that many readers abandon books at the opening when those elements are missing.
ADVICE

Build An Artificial Slush Pile

  • Create an artificial slush pile of first pages and mark which ones make you lean in to learn what consistently grabs attention.
  • Erin Roberts recommends comparing pieces to discover why one beginning works better than another.
INSIGHT

Control Signals Competence

  • Control in the opening signals the author knows the story's shape and reassures readers like a well-hosted party.
  • DongWon Song compares good openings to intentional hospitality that makes readers feel safe and guided.
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