Writing Excuses

21.08: Setting Expectations

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Feb 22, 2026
They explore how openings signal genre, tone, and the emotional ride readers can expect. The hosts explain using small problems and relatable goals to promise bigger stakes. They talk about making and fulfilling tiny promises, letting readers feel clever, and answering quick questions to build trust. They warn against tonal mismatches that break reader expectations.
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INSIGHT

Openings Show The Shape Of The Story

  • Openings must communicate the story's shape so readers know what kind of ride they're signing up for.
  • DongWon Song compares it to seeing a roller coaster's loops and drops so you expect genre, tone, and plot style early.
ADVICE

Set Protagonist Type By Chapter End

  • By the end of the first chapter you should give readers a sense of the protagonist type and the story's stakes.
  • DongWon Song cites Six of Crows prologue as a model that establishes magic, genre, and expected violence quickly.
ADVICE

Match Opening Proportions To Format

  • Scale your opening to story length: novel openings span scenes, short fiction must compress the same signals into a half page.
  • Mary Robinette Kowal warns editors decide quickly and slush readers expect that microcosm fast.
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