
Ben Franklin's World BFW Revisited: A Declaration in Draft
Jul 8, 2025
Peter Onuf, Jefferson scholar and UVA professor emeritus; Patrick Spiro, historian-librarian studying Franklin; Danielle Allen, Harvard political theorist and author. They trace how many hands shaped the Declaration. They discuss drafting choices, committee edits, Franklin’s word-level changes, Jefferson’s influences, and the removed anti-slavery passage.
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Committee Choice Was Political And Practical
- The Committee of Five reflected political balancing rather than lone authorship, with Jefferson chosen for time, writing skill, and Southern representation.
- Danielle Allen notes Adams campaigned for Jefferson so the South wouldn't feel marginalized by Northern dominance.
Multiple Hands Shaped The Final Text
- Jefferson's draft was edited by Adams and Franklin before Congress, and Congress later cut roughly 25% and added religious language.
- Patrick Spiro and Danielle Allen highlight that key wording like 'Creator' and divine providence entered through edits.
Adams Gave Us Pursuit Of Happiness
- John Adams strongly influenced the Declaration's shift from 'property' to 'pursuit of happiness' through his 1776 writings.
- Danielle Allen links Adams's pamphlet and Massachusetts proclamation to Jefferson's eventual phrase life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness.







