How to Make a Simple Sentence Better

So let's think of three like easy simple sentences that a student might write and then we can talk about how to make it better. First rule guys, if you are using a word that you learned in your first year of English, don't use it. So I am of the opinion that undertaking exotic adventures is highly beneficial. Is an awesome phrase instead of I think I feel I believe. That's another really good word. Studious, what does studious mean? Studious, intelligent and well read,. Wow, well read. Good, good student-y.