#6: Ray Edwards—Why Your Sales Copy Stinks (and How to Fix It)
The StoryBrand Podcast
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How to Rip Apart Your Website to Help Move Forward
We're going to get Brenda on the line here. We are a third party electrical maintenance contractor and we work with commercial property managers. And I got to tell you, first impression, it's beautiful. It's a great visual image. You've got very few words on the website. But for the people who are outside of your industry, they're not going to fully understand everything either. So we're going to come at this from a fresh perspective as FTBA team.
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